Studying art in school also improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that studying arts should be made compulsory in schools because it would improve the overall performance of the students and being multi-skilled, they can easily learn new things.

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, I do not agree with

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view and discuss it in the essay. One of the most important aspects of art subjects is that it could improve the social skills of the pupils.

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is because the disciplines like music and theatre would help them to overcome their hesitation and boost their confidence to confront the crowd.

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, when a child sings a song in front of a huge audience, he/she become more confident than before. While it would be overwhelming to even stand on the stage for those who have never been in

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a situation.

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, disciplines

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as drawing and painting would enhance their imagination and creativity.

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, arts should not be obligatory in academia as compulsion would lead to pressure

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affects the students' performance.

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, technical studies require a lot of concentration and hard work, and if those students are forced to attend music or dance classes,

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would overburden them and reduce their concentration in the core studies.

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, arts could be made optional, so that those who are interested would take it by their own wish and would reap its benefits.

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would not only reduce their stress, but

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prepare them for the promising future. In conclusion,

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art studies would enhance social skills and enhance creative thinking in pupils, I believe that it should not be made compulsory part of their curriculum as forcing is naturally averse to humans, and it would do more harm than good.

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Cognitive development
Critical thinking
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Perspectives
Emotional outlet
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Historical art movements
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