IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7

Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

#people #career #path #lives #life
It is true that working accomplishment is important in our
life
. There are amount of people willing to keep it in advance in order to receive a satisfying
life
 in the working field.
However
, I believe that the satisfying of
life
 in working has another way that we can achieve in
life
. On the one hand, people who believe to find a
job
 in advance in term of working
life
 can fulfil their achievement in order to receive the satisfaction they has achieved from
work
. They tend to believe that the experienced they had in
this
 field is the step to reach the top of satisfied, so the earlier paths they get involved
then
 the fastest form they reach.
For example
, if you
work
 for the government in Taiwan, the working period is the standard of promotion for employees and the long time you have stayed at a company, the more benefits you can receive.
However
, there are some other style can be achieved for a satisfying
work
life
.
Firstly
, working as habits, which means that the
work
 you are interesting and satisfying. Most people had a hard time with their
job
 because they feel bored even annoy with their career, in opposite employee will feel more satisfied if the
job
 is relative to their habit.
For example
, if the
job
 that people had chosen is enjoyable and relative to their interest, they will be more motivated to complete their task from
work
.
Therefore
, if we can choose the
job
 that we are enjoyable
that is
 another way to reach a satisfying
life
 in
work
. In conclusion, people have different point of views in their complement from
work
. Some people believe that the best way to reach a satisfying
work
life
 is join it in advance, while I believe that working with habit is easier to reach it.
Submitted by Christy's Kitchen on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: