Public museums and art galleries are not needed because people can see historical objects and artistic works by using computers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Not only public museums are

archaic but

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archaic, but

also

art galleries are no needed owing to the fact that visitors may see the exhibitions by using computers. I completely disagree that public exhibitions are not required

this

is because

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,

firstly

the visitors there may have a topical

conversations

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conversation

between each other,

secondly

people may value and remember better the knowledge which was obtained from there

,

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,

rather than from some kind of a website. One reason why exhibits should be displaced in a specialized building rather than on

internet

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the internet

is that people may communicate between themselves. When spectators examine the painting, historical

artifact

a man-made object taken as a whole

artefact

artefacts

, etc.

they

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They

come up with some

conclusion

about the value, meaning, etc.

about

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About

it, and share it with their

neighbor

a person who lives (or is located) near another

neighbours

neighbour

.

This

is because people cannot judge themselves critically,

thus

they speak out their

conclusion

to

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

visitor in order to create a refined or completely ne

conclusion

whether about a painting or an

artifact

a man-made object taken as a whole

artefact

. A prime example that illustrates

this

is the trip to a

museum

of my friend. Little did he realize that he will have all of the material, which he lacked, for his history research paper from the conversation with the

museum

guard. Another point to consider is that

museum

guests remember the knowledge from the

museum

better rather than from the website. In the other words, people spend more time thinking about the particular exhibition and would allocate some money and

considerable amount

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a considerable amount

of time,

thus

people value more their experience visiting a

museum

or an art gallery. As a

consequence they

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consequence, they

invest noticeably more resources in order to visit a

museum

comparatively

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compared

to a couple of mouse clicks. Indeed, the trip of fifth graders to the history of Ukraine

museum

made them to learn the topic better than the previous unit, since

latter

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the latter

did not have a

museum

trip included. In

conclusion

, I am

finely

after an unspecified period of time or an especially long delay

finally

convinced that on no account museums and art galleries should be abandoned. Not only because of conversations between visitors, but

also

because of them obtaining more knowledge in a

museum

, compared to the

visit

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visitors

to a website.