Many university degree holders cannot find a job in their chosen profession.What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, should be done about it ?
Unfortunately many
university students have to choose a different career path.The reasons for the same are mainly due to imbalances in the job sector.In my view, proper planning by the government can bring the situation under control.
Crucial factors contributing for not finding a job in Accept comma addition
Unfortunately, many
chosen
profession are Suggestion
choosing
lack
of availability and pay disparity. In many countries, jobs available and university offering courses are not aligned properly. Suggestion
the lack
For instance
, an excerpt from the Stanford mentioned that half of the graduates from Linking Words
United Kingdom
have pursued business and one in every three graduates from India is an engineer. Suggestion
the United Kingdom
This
is forcing them to shift to a new industry for a living. Linking Words
Also
, salary differences in some of the industries Linking Words
is
Suggestion
are also leading
also
leading to change their profession. Linking Words
For example
, scientists in many developing countries Linking Words
are paid often
very less where they do not have any option but to quit and continue in a different domain.
Suggestion
are often paid
often are paid
This
inequality can be mitigated by careful planning at individual and government level. Governments should understand how the market is shaping up, focus on increasing the corresponding skill set. Linking Words
Also
, ensuring there is a correlation between the no of graduates and the employees for a particular industry. Linking Words
For example
, Vietnam focused on improving industrial skills as they knew many industries will be set up because of its economic policies. Linking Words
This
helped immensely for the students and resulted in double digit economic growth. Linking Words
Although
planning from the congress is required, one must understand the trends at Linking Words
individual level
for a better future.
To conclude, many graduates are ending up in a different profession than they wished for, because of the inequalities between the courses offered and industry prevalent. Countries should predict the market trends and focus on providing the necessary skill set for its graduates.Suggestion
the individual level
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite