Watching TV shows and movies about crime is becoming more and more popular. Why is this? What effect does that have on society?

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Crime

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based TV shows and are becoming the trend of our today's life

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This

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is because,

instead

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of watching

comedy

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a comedy

or usual soap operas,

majority

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the majority

of people chose to be fan of

crime

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oriented films. In my opinion, it has both positive and negative impact on society. In these days, movies and shows, which are about

crime

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, have been gaining

more attendance

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more attention

as opposed to other genres.

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, by considering current situations in some countries like Iran or Syria people have more willing to watch special shows about Wars. Despite the fact that other genres' popularity, people prone to know about

crime

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For instance

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, some of these films have main aim to show how governments' people determine causes for breaking

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the tranquility

by terrorists. By

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such

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kinds of shows and films have won the respect of people. From another perspective, most

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people do not acknowledge the whole meaning of these movies and they are highly likely to do so.

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, they will probably turn into illegal side and try to violate human rights by heinous and rapist doings.

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advantageous side

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the advantageous side

this

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films

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film

is that, it increases awareness of society

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From them they can deduce whether

people

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the people

around them is befriended or

robber

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robbed

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, in order to heighten the horizon, these movies are serving as a facilitator. According to experiments conducted by Stanford university shown that, 70% of people have ability to react properly in peak situations after watching those movies. To conclude,

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crime

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oriented films and shows are popular, they are likely to have both negative and positive implication to their viewers, I guess.

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