Many people today are choosing to travel to other countries. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or negative development?

In these days, healthy proportion of people choose to get along the world. I believe that, the reason for

this

is high living

standarts

a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated

standards

and

this

could be negative because of increasing numbers of migrants. It is obvious that, nowadays more and more people try to possess flourishing future and for the most parts they will find it in foreign countries. Because in some countries, there are many organisations which would subsidize new comers with money or houses.

This

can be seen in countries which of their population is less and not equal to their territory.

This

kind of places are attracting for migrants and they consider it as if

this

is

optimum choice

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the optimum choice

. They are highly likely to be employed to make money for

survival

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the survival

of their family. The recently adopted rule in Russian Federation attracted more people to

there

objective case of they

them

their

. According to

this

, if the migrant family is becoming to expand by giving birth to

child

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a child

children

, government

autorities

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

authorities

give them funds.

However

,

this

could cause to some problematic issues,

for

instance there

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instance, there

will be millions of illegal migrants.

Wellcoming

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Welcoming

country gives them

exact period

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an exact period

of time

peple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

can stay there. When the time

is expired they

Suggestion

expires, they

expires they

should leave or extend the period.

For

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In

the most

cases people

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cases, people

do their work by illegal ways

.

Accept space

.

Moreover

, they may commit a crime to find money to make ends meet. After

this

, conflicts can be increased among the city dwellers. Due to

this

plural of "this"

these

borders of countries will probably be closed for short- time to avoid

such

migrants. Korean government have faced with the very problem in 2012 with China. According to

this

, Korea postponed flights of January month to China due to,

illegalities

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the illegalities

of Chinese

poeple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

. To conclude, travelling can be

good idea

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a good idea

to know about new cultures and nations.

However

, those people who travel around the world should not do out-of-law doings.