After graduation many students take a year to travel. Some think that it would be more useful to work for a year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Majority
of students, who finished their tertiary education, spend a Suggestion
The majority
year
in foreign countries. Others believe it wolud
be effective to be employed for a past tense of "will"
would
year
. I think, both thoughts are equally useful because a year
in abroad can
expand their horizons and experience can be Suggestion
abroad can
upsurged
if they work.
Most of universities follow Travel and Work strategy for their students. a sudden forceful flow
upsurge
However
, healthy proportion of students will probably visit foreign countries in a 1-year
period. It can serve as a stimuli
which urge them to live or continue their master's degree in those countries. The reason for Suggestion
stimulus
this
the high
living Suggestion
higher
standards
, in my view. Suggestion
standard
For example
, people who travels
along the world can possess the ability to improve and expand their world view by learning Suggestion
travel
diversity
of cultures and nations, I guess. The recent survey conducted by the university of John Hopkins shown that students after having a Suggestion
a diversity
the diversity
year
in other countries are opt
for continuing their academic life or setting up their business.
When it comes Suggestion
is opting
opts
to spend
Suggestion
to spending
time
on working instead
of travelling, it has some benefits too. New members of staff can heighten their experience and get some promotions if they show enthusiasm towards their job. During their working process, they are highly likely to pursue more vocational skills by some training organisation located in the very city or in abroad. Moreover
, there is no need to separate extra time
to visit other contries
. a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
In addition
to this
, if the employee is very experienced after working some time
and speaks in other languages fluently, there is a high level of chance of getting invited by international organisations like WBO (World's Bank Organisation)
To conclude, both of ways
give chance to travel along the Suggestion
the ways
world whether
by spending Accept comma addition
world, whether
time
for fun or visiting or by career related flights.Submitted by Jakhongir on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite