A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research Discuss both views and give your opinion

Animals should not be captivated or exploited and they should possess the very rights which humanity has according to healthy proportion of people's opinion.

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, others believe that recruitment of animals necessary for satisfaction of people's personal different needs,

food

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and research

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. The latter thought is

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me to justify them because of shortcomings of

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and experiments on them. It is obvious that, extinction of animals can cause problems and

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is proven by many animals saving organisations. They argue that, all animals should be kept in

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captivity

,

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they have to possess their own rights like humans.

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, by controlling their reproduction they can serve to people in

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the form

of

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. In these days, due to increasing numbers of human population,

gentically

by genetic mechanisms

genetically

modified organism (GMO) based meals are becoming popular and they have negative implications

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for

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human body. To tackle it, it would be best to consume healthy

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meat of animals. They are full of nutrients that are crucial for people.

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, owing to lack of experiments in medicine, millions of

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deaths

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is witnessing

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around the globe and their causes are not identified. So as to tackle

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issue animals in medical fields play

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a crucial role

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, scientist can experiment on them. By doing so, those animals can save

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humanity's

survival

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of being captivated in zoos, I guess. One of the most severe influenza

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birds called avian influenza have caused exorbitant numbers of death in Asia due to shortages of medical experiments on animals.

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,

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problem is solved by making

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a vaccine

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disease. To conclude, it would be nothing but an advantage to the world if animals are used for needs by controlling their population.

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, with the help of their

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we are highly likely to avoid tremendous problems in

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years, I think.