Some people think that children should be punished when they commit a crime. Some others think that their parents should be punished. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
For some people museums should be places where people can enjoy and spend time for entertainment.
However
, their opponents claim that these places' main aim should be educate
people. They should possess both of Suggestion
should educate
paths
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the paths
,
in my view.
From one perspective, it is obvious that the main service of museums is to entertain people together with enjoying them. In well-known cities like New York and London are optimum destination for millions of tourists Accept space
,
anually
. without missing a year
annually
Moreover
, they can see the exhibitions of several nations
or myths, but the annoying point of these excursions Suggestion
the several nations
are
highly likely Suggestion
is
tobe
the sound of Suggestion
to be
guide
. Most of Suggestion
the guide
sections
there created Suggestion
the sections
specially
for taking picturesque photos of to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
extincted
animals and gain information about them. After refurbishment taken in no longer in existence; lost or especially having died out leaving no living representatives
extinct
National museum
of London increased the number of visitors, all of Suggestion
the National museum
this
due to new artefacts and exhibits from Pharaohs in Egypt.
However
, this
kind of places are not for only tourists, it is also
for students. Some people have no interest for
ancient history or exhibits, but just after they have visited museums their thoughts and world- views will probably Suggestion
in
changed
. Because Suggestion
change
abovemetioned
exhibits can kindle their interest, and they tend to find out information about them. Moreover
, for the most parts young children visit those places in order to see celebrity people or former presidents like Franklin Roosevelt. As a result
, these people can serve as a stimuli
for young, I think. According to Suggestion
stimulus
survey
conducted by German experts of Education shown that, over the half of pupils changed their characters and attitudes towards education due to trips organised to museums.
To conclude, if museums follow both Suggestion
a survey
path
, government authorities and students would benefit from Suggestion
paths
this
, I think.Submitted by Jakhongir on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite