Some people think that children should be punished when they commit a crime. Some others think that their parents should be punished. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

For some people museums should be places where people can enjoy and spend time for entertainment.

However

, their opponents claim that these places' main aim

should be educate

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should educate

people. They should possess both of

paths

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the paths

,

Accept space

,

in my view. From one perspective, it is obvious that the main service of museums is to entertain people together with enjoying them. In well-known cities like New York and London are optimum destination for millions of tourists

anually

without missing a year

annually

.

Moreover

, they can see the exhibitions of

several nations

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the several nations

or myths, but the annoying point of these excursions

are

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is

highly likely

tobe

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to be

the sound of

guide

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the guide

. Most of

sections

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the sections

there created

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

for taking picturesque photos of

extincted

no longer in existence; lost or especially having died out leaving no living representatives

extinct

animals and gain information about them. After refurbishment taken in

National museum

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the National museum

of London increased the number of visitors, all of

this

due to new artefacts and exhibits from Pharaohs in Egypt.

However

,

this

kind of places are not for only tourists, it is

also

for students. Some people have no interest

for

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in

ancient history or exhibits, but just after they have visited museums their thoughts and world- views will probably

changed

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change

. Because

abovemetioned

exhibits can kindle their interest, and they tend to find out information about them.

Moreover

, for the most parts young children visit those places in order to see celebrity people or former presidents like Franklin Roosevelt.

As a result

, these people can serve as a

stimuli

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stimulus

for young, I think. According to

survey

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a survey

conducted by German experts of Education shown that, over the half of pupils changed their characters and attitudes towards education due to trips organised to museums. To conclude, if museums follow both

path

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paths

, government authorities and students would benefit from

this

, I think.