Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
It is said that nowadays
people
from different countries
can buy the same products
anywhere in the world and that leads to a strong level of similarity across the countries
. I think the effect of this
development
of
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on
the
society is more positive than negative.
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apply
For
the positive side, living in Change preposition
On
the
modern society with Correct article usage
a
same
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the same
products
surrounding us means that we can buy the products
which are popular in other countries
. I believe that can give people
more choices to make and can purchase worldwide's
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worldwide
products
without going abroad. So people
can save their
time and cost, but in the meantime, they can Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
enjoy the different products
from overseas, such
as they can eat KFC in China instead
of flying to America to eat. Furthermore
, this
development
can create many jobs for local people
. As more and more people
turn to buying international brands, but sometimes they don't have the
access to buy it, so there are many buying Correct article usage
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agent
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agents
help
them by delivering the Correct pronoun usage
who help
products
as their job and this
can improve countries
' economic development
and increase the social employment.
But everything has a downside and countries
become
similar to each other is not an exception. Wrong verb form
becoming
Due to
the impact of international products
, more and more traditional brands are facing a survival challenge. They have to produce more innovative products
to attract customers and some of them may just vanish from the market or purchased
by Add a missing verb
be purchased
lager
brands. Correct your spelling
larger
That is
a huge loss of cultural diversity.
So in conclusion, this
development
is inevitable in modern society and I say that we have to accept it and find a way to live with itSubmitted by Shrika Lani on
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