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When so many people are starving to death in different parts of the world, do you think it is justifiable for any government to spend money on Space Exploration Projects? Give your views.

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It is normally believed that in order to improve
work
 efficiency, employees should be given one month break from
work
. In my opinion, I believe that getting off from
work
 is important for everyone. Everyone should get a chance to get rid of
work
 for
sometime
Suggestion
some time
 and enjoy some joyful time. One of the main reasons for getting leave from
work
 is to improve productivity and creativity. It is normal that people cannot
work
 throughout the year without any break. By taking a vacation, they feel refreshed and get a change from their
stressfull
extremely irritating to the nerves
stressful
work
 life.
This
 helps them to
work
 better when they come back on duty.
Thus
, it is beneficial to take some time off the
work
. I can tell from my personal experience
,
Accept space
,
when our company workers got holiday for three weeks during summer break
last
 year, the profits of our company were 25% more than that were before
holidays
Suggestion
the holidays
.
Thus
, the holidays
relived
(of pain or sorrow) made easier to bear
relieved
 us from hectic
work
 and constant stress
.
Accept space
.
Lastly
, holidays can be an opportunity for employees to spend quality time with their family members along with maintaining a balance between
work
 and life.
Thus
Suggestion
This
 holidays for just a
months
Suggestion
month
 in a year will make the workers as well as employers better at their job. In conclusion,
although
 it is important for employees to take breaks from their
work
 in order to increase their performance and
creativity but
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creativity, but
 long leaves might come with financial problems for
organisation
Suggestion
the organisation
organisations
 which can affect the organisation in a bad manner.
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