In many countries smoking is now illegal in public places. Do you agree or disagree?

#countries #places

At present, in many countries have imposed about banning of smoking in public areas because

this

activity can

lead people have

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lead people to have

health

problems.

Therefore

, I firmly agree with

this

statement and will discuss my view in

this

essay. Smoking is seen as

harmful triggered factor

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a harmful triggered factor

harmful triggered factors

that can harm

human's

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human

health

such

as Chronic obstructive pulmonary disease (COPD), Asthma, Bronchitis and so on. Which is related to other organ diseases like heart and vascular diseases.

As a result

, governments should approach measures to solve

this

issue about forbidding smokers to smoke in crowded places,

such

as restaurants, parks, bus stations as

this

can disturb other people.

For instance

, in Thailand, the

health

authority campaigns and give education for Thai citizens to understand and realise about a number of drawbacks of smoking.

In addition

, smoking areas should be provided for these groups in order to not to annoy some individual who not smoke.

Moreover

, there

are

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some research from

Lung cancer institution

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the Lung cancer institution

Lung cancer institutions

reported that a person who is

second

hand

smoker

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smoke

has more risk to be sick from lung cancer more than a person who smokes approximately 7% in total of nationwide.

For example

, my patient died from lung cancer and metastatic breast without

history

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a history

of smoking but her husband who did smoke still alive.

Additionally

, it can disturb some people who do not like its smell and may exacerbate of asthma or some respiratory distress syndrome caused of fatality. To sum up, there is no any advantage of smoking

besides

only disadvantages as it can lead to

health

diseases, which is not only a smoker but

also

impacted on their family or friends who are surrounding them. I still strongly agree

with banning of

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with banning

smoking in sharing places.

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