In many countries smoking is now illegal in public places. Do you agree or disagree?

At present, in many countries have imposed about banning of smoking in public areas because
this
activity can
lead people have
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lead people to have
health
problems.
Therefore
, I firmly agree with
this
statement and will discuss my view in
this
essay. Smoking is seen as
harmful triggered factor
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a harmful triggered factor
harmful triggered factors
that can harm
human's
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human
health
such
as Chronic obstructive pulmonary disease (COPD), Asthma, Bronchitis and so on. Which is related to other organ diseases like heart and vascular diseases.
As a result
, governments should approach measures to solve
this
issue about forbidding smokers to smoke in crowded places,
such
as restaurants, parks, bus stations as
this
can disturb other people.
For instance
, in Thailand, the
health
authority campaigns and give education for Thai citizens to understand and realise about a number of drawbacks of smoking.
In addition
, smoking areas should be provided for these groups in order to not to annoy some individual who not smoke.
Moreover
, there
are
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is
some research from
Lung cancer institution
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the Lung cancer institution
Lung cancer institutions
reported that a person who is
second
hand
smoker
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smoke
has more risk to be sick from lung cancer more than a person who smokes approximately 7% in total of nationwide.
For example
, my patient died from lung cancer and metastatic breast without
history
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a history
of smoking but her husband who did smoke still alive.
Additionally
, it can disturb some people who do not like its smell and may exacerbate of asthma or some respiratory distress syndrome caused of fatality. To sum up, there is no any advantage of smoking
besides
only disadvantages as it can lead to
health
diseases, which is not only a smoker but
also
impacted on their family or friends who are surrounding them. I still strongly agree
with banning of
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with banning
smoking in sharing places.
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