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You made a mistake in classroom. Write a letter to your teacher. In the letter: State your apology Describe the situation Write about your promise to change. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr Jones, Good morning.I am writing to apologise for my huge mistake in mathematics class yesterday.Since it was unintentional and I had not planned to do
such
 a stupid thing I sincerely ask you to accept my apology. First of all, I want to tell you about the situation before you enter the classroom. Peter was laughing at me
due to
 my errors in math practice questions. He tried to persuade the others to call me "dull Roy" and I could not tolerate his rude behaviour and threw my bag at him. Exactly at that time, you entered and my bag hit your face. You do not know how much I am sorry about my wrong manner. When I re-think about yesterday I feel awful about myself. As You know it is expected from a student to do something wrong and be ashamed after a
while
 and I am completely in
this
 situation now. I humbly request you to forgive me. I promise it was the
last
 time I misbehaved in your class and did not respect you. Yours sincerely, Roy Walker
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writing tone
Ensure to maintain a formal tone throughout your letter, especially in greetings and closings.
detailing
Consider adding more details about how you plan to change your behavior, ensuring your apology feels sincere and actionable.
structure
The letter has a clear structure, with each paragraph dedicated to a specific aspect of the apology, which enhances the coherence and cohesion of your writing.
task response
Your prompt acknowledgment of your mistake and expression of remorse shows a good level of maturity and understanding of the situation, effectively addressing the task's requirements.
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