Some people think that planting trees in open space cities and towns is more important than building houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is considered by most of the people that tree plantation in urban cities
as along the roadside or countryside is essential.
In contrast
, others believe that
space should be utilized to construct apartments and houses. In my opinion, I completely agree that planting trees is necessary as it will help to reduce pollution and to maintain balance in the ecosystem.
, trees contribute significantly to reducing the pollution level by absorbing co2 emitted from vehicles, industries, and other manufacturing units.
, planting trees along the roadside and in open areas will not only save us from contaminated
air but
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air, but
give us a refreshing environment which is good for physical and mental health.
, trees
provide shelter and habitat
wildlife and play a vital role in maintaining a balance in the ecosystem.
, tree plantation can bring people
to nature as most of the people are living in metropolitan cities because of their job or education, and
as a result
, they are away from nature's life.
, planting trees is vital to have a healthy environment, especially in urban areas. There are
some other benefits. To give a clear example,
as trees
harmful sun rays which, can lead to severe skin diseases; they
provide shelter to
homeless poor
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homeless, poor
people; they
act as a noise buffer and
reduce noise pollution to some extent. To conclude, I believe that tree plantation is significant to have a healthy and growing environment. The government and citizens should take initiatives to increase the number of trees in their localities.
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