An increasing number of people are now using dating sites to meet their second halves. Do you think this tendency helps people to socialize or does more harm than good? Give your opinion, provide relevant examples if necessary.

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As the world is moving towards enhanced technological applications. In many countries tendency of online purchasing, online works, e- learning is going to increase with the passage of time.
Besides
this
dating sites too are now becoming more popular and people used these sites to find a good friend and a better half.
This
essay will discuss the pros and cons of using dating sites to socialize.
First
of all, it is obvious that in
this
modern era of technology, people do all of their work through the internet. A life of individual has become so busy that they have no spare time to spend with their loved ones. Due to
this
, stress and depression problems are
also
increasing because people find no one to listen their problems, encourage them and provide sympathy. Dating sites have solved
this
more to some extent. It is very easy to make friends and find the
second
halves with the same attitude and desired habits. Through the internet people can easily interact with the other people, who lives a thousand miles away from them. Chatting with them can be a very good time spending activity as people feel no loneliness. In my personal opinion, to some limit it is fine to socialize through online dating websites. But over using of these websites can lead towards addiction of
this
. People can
also
be scammed and fooled. In the dating websites physical absence is the one major drawback, which can create various serious problems.
For example
, people create ids with fake names and personal information, they use false information to interact with another person.
Moreover
, security concern is
also
a great threat which is associated with online dating. Concluding
this
essay, in my general opinion, it is way better to find
second
half in real life rather than searching on the internet or a dating website.
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