When so many people are starving to death in different parts of the world, do you think it is justifiable for any government to spend money on Space Exploration Projects? Give your views.

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Undoubtedly, the

indiviuals

a human being

individuals

are dying from lack of food in various parts of

world

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the world

. The regulatory bodies expending funds on Space Exploration

plrojects

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Accept space

I believe that

authorties

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the authorities

authorities

should incur money to feed people rather than spending on other projects.

To begin

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with, Focus of government should be on feed humans

first

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. In the USA spending money on so many

projects but

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projects, but

there are a lot of

peopel

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

who have not two time meal in a day.

Besides

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this

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, Many of people

has

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have

no education. So, government should keep

this

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issue on their priorities. As they can feed their families. As according to research,

apporximatly

(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct

approximately

39 %

is umemployed which

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are unemployed, which

is unemployed which

are unemployed which

are umemployed which

increase the rapid rate of death. The

governement

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

backbone

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the backbone

country

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the country

a country

to a very great extent or degree

, they should

chanalize

direct the course; determine the direction of travelling

channelize

canalize

channelise

their

priorties

status established in order of importance or urgency

priorities

properties

protest

. To conclude, Government should address the

press

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pressing

issue. They should feed the people as wasting

mony

the most common medium of exchange; functions as legal tender

money

on other space exploration projects which is no way will help people to fight

hungar

a physiological need for food; the consequence of food deprivation

hunger

Hungary

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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When so many people are starving to death in different parts of the world, do you think it is justifiable for any government to spend money on Space Exploration Projects? Give your views.

Fully explain your ideas

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

some university students want to learn about other subjects in additioon to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Governments should not financially support artists (like painters, writers, musicians, etc.) because arts do not improve people's lives. Instead, they should let artists support themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many young people do not spend their holidays and weekends doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in natural environments. Why is this the case? How can they be encouraged to go out?