Most people could not go to work in quarantine period and stayed at home due to the Covid-19 pandemic. What problems lockdown may arise, and how can these problems be tackled.

In order to vindicate population from unstoppable pandemic all government declared quarantine period, when no one is able to go anywhere. Sedentary lifestyle around the globe may bring health related issues and global economic
atrophy which
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atrophy, which
can be solved by uniting forces of us, I guess. Sitting in isolation without any physical actions is taken into account as
primary reason
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the primary reason
a primary reason
for obesity since a certain amount of calories gained through consuming
are
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is
unable to be smashed, I believe.
In
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On
this
turn, most devices and qualities of lifestyle are based and designed for indoor life,
such
as game pads and internet service providers. In order to find
proper solution
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a proper solution
to protect ordinary people, social media and other people who are staunch to sport should be busy with urging them to do daily exercises. What’s more, current economic system cannot be run without
contribution
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the contribution
of middle and small entrepreneurship.
Therefore
, the long-lasting quarantine procedure might be detrimental and bring numerous problems that are unable to be tackled. Taking recent report by
World Economy Organization
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the World Economy Organization
in May 2020, it can be witnessed that namely proportion of world trade circulation exacerbated as if irreversibly. If the cyber-
labors
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labours
and robotic based factories are allowed to be activated, they might supply daily demands,
although
this
panacea is under the meticulous investigation of numerous governors owing to public demand for the connotation. By way of conclusion, inactivity of today’s day and age people
will presumably
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will, presumably
,
nonetheless
can be escaped easily by basic physical activities like push-down. The technologies are invincible to any of the noxious viruses,
hence
robotic maids should be legalized even in quarantine, I think.
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