You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your good friend helped you prepare for an important presentation at work. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - Describe how your friend helped you - Explain why you appreciate this help so much - Offer to do something nice for your friend to repay the favor Write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Malini,
Hope you are doing great. I wanted to thank you for helping me in preparing my annual sales presentation. I followed almost all the instructions, that you have mentioned in you have mentioned over the call.
Initially
I was extremely nervous, but later, things did fall in place and prove to be a huge success.
Some of your tips that genuinely help me while preparing Add a comma
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Firstly
, I displayed maximum sales data in tabular form, so the investors are able to get a clear picture. By doing this
my data looked more organised. Secondly
, in order to make statistic
more interesting, I created line graphs. Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
Such
kind
of visualizations did impress all the higher officials. Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
Thirdly
, as you said that I need to be careful with my body language,
while talking and discussing with the audience. Remove the comma
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Therefore
, I added some decent humour, while answering questions related to the topic, so that people should not feel hesitant in asking more queries. Also
, quoted some real life
experiences and examples while explaining some subjective points, in order to break the monotony.
I know you are very busy theseAdd a hyphen
real-life
,
since you are planning to shift to another city. But despite all Remove the comma
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this
, you still managed to take some time for me. Nor did you discuss about
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each
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every
point in the presentation, but Correct quantifier usage
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also
share some significant videos as well. You motivated me throughout my journey and kept my
pacified Correct pronoun usage
me
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my mistakes. Change preposition
about
I my
stupendous performance during the presentation, surprised everyone in the meeting.
Since you have been my support system, in Correct pronoun usage
My
this
crucial hour, I want to show my gratitude by helping you in shifting. I will fly to your city by Friday evening on 27th Mrach
and we can together go to Seattle on Saturday morning. I know right now you are, packing Correct your spelling
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all
everything by yourself, but once I will be there you can do it together and wind things up a little faster. Just let me know if you are okay with the planCorrect quantifier usage
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,
so that I can Remove the comma
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further
book tickets.
Kindly reply once you receive my letter.
Best wishes,
ShreyaSubmitted by shreya1990s on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite