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Some people think that a sense of competition should be encouraged. Others believe that children who taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many people encourage a sense of
competition
 in children while, others think it is important to teach children to co-operate which help them become better adults. In my opinion
competition
 leads a negative impact on a child’s mind.
On the other hand
, co-operation helps them to work more efficiently as a team member and a
life
 partner.
Competition
 leads to a sense of envy towards the other people. When parents pressurize their children to be better than other children, they start developing a hatred for their competitor.
This
 leads a child to take negative action towards competitors to win against them or they suffer depression and they try to end their lives. The cases of children committing suicide due to high pressure and
competition
is increasing
Suggestion
are increasing
 drastically.
In contrast
 to
this
 cultivating habit of cooperation in children help them to become better individuals. In today’s
life it
Accept comma addition
life, it
 is very important to learn to work in a team as a team member.
Also
, a person who has a cooperative nature has better relationships with everyone around him and they become better
life
 partners. In
life
 there is some time when things are not as we want, or we have planned. During
such
 difficult time a cooperative person can handle it in a better way and can come out through tough situations. To conclude, cooperation helps to build better relations with everyone while
competition
 develops hatred towards other people. So, it is important to teach our children to cooperate.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • encourage
  • compete
  • cooperate
  • useful
  • adults
  • skills
  • motivation
  • drive
  • resilience
  • failure
  • workplace
  • empathy
  • social skills
  • reduce
  • stress
  • pressure
  • balanced
  • approach
  • ideal
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