Topic 01. It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. What do you think is the reason for a growth in the rate of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?
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is addicted
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parents
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children
As a result
, they start looking for options to buy and end up with doing some crime
in the society to fullfil
the wish. put in effect
fulfil
For instance
, a famous new channel complete the survey to validate the crime
rate in 2015 and published that crime rate
in youth has been increased by 30 percentage in a year.
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the crime rate
responsibilty
of their kids. By the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
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such
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of their family. Some Suggestion
the financial burdens
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childrens
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children
accordingly
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. the particular occupation for which you are trained
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