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Topic 01. It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. What do you think is the reason for a growth in the rate of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?

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As technology
advancing
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advances
is advancing
, the growth of crimes
have increased
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has increased
 in
contemporary era
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the contemporary era
. Adolescents are destroying their career by
invloving
connect closely and often incriminatingly
involving
 in crimes which is affecting their future. In the following essay, I intend to delve into the causes
for
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of
 increasing crimes and provide
solution
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solutions
a solution
 in my perspective. There
are
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is
 a plethora of reasons why
crime rate
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the crime rate
is increased
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increases
 in
current generation
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the current generation
.
Firstly
, kids
are addicted
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is addicted
 to
luxury life
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the luxury life
 from the childhood. What I mean, as they start going to schools and colleges, they tend to buy a trendy gadgets and costly bikes which are beyond their
parents
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parents'
parent's
parent
 capacity.
Therefore
, as their parents do not agree to buy,
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
 find a ways to purchase these items.
As a result
, they start looking for options to buy and end up with doing some
crime
 in the society to
fullfil
put in effect
fulfil
 the wish.
For instance
, a famous new channel complete the survey to validate the
crime
 rate in 2015 and published that
crime rate
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the crime rate
 in youth has been increased by 30 percentage in a year. There are several ways to alleviate the crimes. Parents should own the
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
 of their kids. By
closley
in a close relation or position in time or space
closely
 monitoring of infants, they should be able to know
desires
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the desires
 of their children. So that they can guide
such
 way that they get an idea of
finanical burderns
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the financial burdens
financial burderns
financial burdens
finanical burdens
 of their family. Some
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
 may understand the situation and
accordingly
 they support family rather putting pressure on buying things which are not essential neither their studies nor
carrer
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
care
.
In addition
,
goverment
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the government
government
 should have some
campaign which
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campaign, which
educate
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educates
 teenagers about
crime
 and how it
imapct
the striking of one body against another
impact
 their life when they go to prison.
In put
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Input
 it in a nutshell, I pen
down saying
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down, saying
 that, there are ways to
diminsh
decrease in size, extent, or range
diminish
 the
crimes it
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crimes, it
 is
responsibilty
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the responsibility
responsibility
responsibilities
 of parents and
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 who are the key resources to stop crimes doing their kids.
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