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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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Since the nuclear
power
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 has been discovered. The
world
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 has been kept in peace by the threat of nuclear weapons.
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, cheap and clean
energy
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 is provided
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 by the nuclear
power
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. So, the advantages and benefits of nuclear technology outweigh the disadvantages. Overall, I agree with the statement the pros for the
environment
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 has to undertake the cons.
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, the cheapest and cleanest
energy
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 are made by the nuclear technology, and we need
this
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energy
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 to keep the
environment
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 safe.
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, our planet needs
energy
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 to keep running and it is better to use the safest
energy
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 than using other energies that causes pollution, and kills the plants and animals. The nuclear
energy
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 has benefits in the
world
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 and cannot be outweighed by the disadvantages
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 caused by money and
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.
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, the
world
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 most powerful countries have to understand that the
world
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 needs to keep in peace, and they cannot use any nuclear weapons threat to other countries.
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, the USA and North Korean need to think more about the benefits of nuclear
power
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 than to make weapons with it.
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, it is important that organisations take care that the money cannot be involved in weapons and It should go for new discoveries and uses of the nuclear technology to keep the
environment
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 and the planet safe. In conclusion, I totally agree with the necessity to think about the benefits of the nuclear potential in the
world
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 and to not outweigh the disadvantages that it has. The
environment
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 is more important than anything else.
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