International travel makes people prejudiced rather than broad minded. What are its causes and what measures can be taken to solve this problem?

Nowadays, international
travel
has flourished to an extent, which had made
world
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the world
a global village. With
this
phenomenon, people have become prejudiced
instead
of broadening their horizon.
This
essay will discuss some of the reasons associated with
mindset
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the mindset
of people while travelling across countries and would
also
suggest some solutions to circumvent the same.
To begin
with,
travel
has become
easy
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easier
than never before. As compared to
past
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the past
, people
travel
widely either for business purpose or for leisure. Undoubtedly, tourism sector contributes to the major part of revenue for
vast majority
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the vast majority
of countries.
However
, people
travel
without prior knowledge regarding the
culture
of the host
country
. Definitely,
this
would lead to narrowing people’s thoughts, as they feel annoyed by the act of the people of
host
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the host country
host countries
country
.
For instance
, in my state most of the religious places have
mandatory custom
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the mandatory custom
to leave the foot wares outside, while there are possibilities that people from other countries may feel strange about the
culture
.
Furthermore
, affluent people would
travel
abroad, without knowing about the host
country
.
This
would often lead to biases and misconceptions.
Hence
, prior knowledge regarding the
country
that we visit adds more value to our purpose of
travel
. Does
this
mean that there
is
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are
no solutions to these problems? Definitely not. Alternatively, people must learn mandatory at the time of visa application about the
culture
that would improve the awareness about different countries.
In addition
, seminars and various campaigns can be conducted by the tour guides and operators which would impart knowledge to the visitors.
Moreover
, if people are exposed to the tradition and
culture
of the
country
,
this
would enhance to broaden their attitude towards the society and
also
would help in building up rapport with the people. To conclude,
although
travelling abroad has made the people narrow minded,
this
can be overcome by taking appropriate steps by themselves learning the
culture
and people involved in
travel industry
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the travel industry
.
Submitted by Dayana Furtal on

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