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Nowadays many jobs are more stressful and the working day is longer. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees?

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Increased work exhaustion and long working hours are becoming a significant issue in our present-day life. Several factors contribute to
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 problem.
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 essay will examine the causes of and possible solutions in detail. The causes behind
increasing job pressure
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the increasing job pressure
 and long working hours are
competition
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competing
competitive
 in the labour market and demand to achieve deadlines. Nowadays, employers have greater flexibility in choosing their employees since the supply of workers exceeds the current requirement.
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 the workers are in a state of constant worry that they might be the replacement by someone else.
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 lack of job safety can lead to increased psychological distress.
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, the individual objectives set by the company might be hard to attain,
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 of the employee's tent to work overtime to meet the respective targets. Some possible solutions to
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 problem involve creating a healthy working environment where there is a good employer-employee relationship. Workers should be encouraged to perform better by providing incentives. They should be allowed to take sufficient breaks and have the freedom to discuss their issues with the employer. The employer should establish the work schedules and workload in
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 a way that employees are working overtime only when necessary. Better performance and productivity can accomplish
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 way. In conclusion, higher competition in the labour market, competitive business are the main reasons for higher stress in the workplace. And the employers have a lot to contribute to improving the situation. A healthy workplaces are very crucial for better performance and productivity of the employees.
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