A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

According to some people, animals have their own possibility and should not be exploited by people, while others think humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs
,
Accept space
,
including uses for food and research. There exist argument to support both sides, here. Now I discuss both sides opinion.
However
, I agree with
latter view
Suggestion
the latter view
. On the one hand, nowadays people exploited the animals,
such
as, some hardworking, for food and research.
However
, animals have their own abilities and possibilities,
such
as, they
talking
Suggestion
talk
are talking
each other and have their own family.
For example
, in the world have a lot of famous animals,
thier
of them or themselves
their
abilities very rare.
Therefore
, they very popular around the world.
Also
, animals very kind and good friend for people.
For example
, dogs, they feel people's feeling, and always ready to help and in all
situation
Suggestion
situations
become together.
On the other hand
, people may meet some challenges, if they live without animals helping. Because they very important some situation,
such
as, some
diffucult
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
works and in the scientist's researches. Because their life not important like people,
also
, they
can not
can not
cannot
live without people's helping. Because, people give them meals and care them.
Also some
Accept comma addition
Also, some
animals become food for people, because their meat delicious and important for people. To conclude, some
animals
Suggestion
animal
friend for people.
Also
, their amount
are
Suggestion
is
limited.
Therefore
, we should
exploite
use or manipulate to one's advantage
exploit
them, only when very useful situations.
Submitted by Asadbek on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
What to do next:
Look at other essays: