A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
According to some people, animals have their own possibility and should not be exploited by people, while others think humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs
,
including uses for food and research. There exist argument to support both sides, here. Now I discuss both sides opinion. Accept space
,
However
, I agree with latter view
.
On the one hand, nowadays people exploited the animals, Suggestion
the latter view
such
as, some hardworking, for food and research. However
, animals have their own abilities and possibilities, such
as, they talking
each other and have their own family. Suggestion
talk
are talking
For example
, in the world have a lot of famous animals, thier
abilities very rare. of them or themselves
their
Therefore
, they very popular around the world. Also
, animals very kind and good friend for people. For example
, dogs, they feel people's feeling, and always ready to help and in all situation
become together.
Suggestion
situations
On the other hand
, people may meet some challenges, if they live without animals helping. Because they very important some situation, such
as, some diffucult
works and in the scientist's researches. Because their life not important like people, not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
also
, they can not
live without people's helping. Because, people give them meals and care them. can not
cannot
Also some
animals become food for people, because their meat delicious and important for people.
To conclude, some Accept comma addition
Also, some
animals
friend for people. Suggestion
animal
Also
, their amount are
limited. Suggestion
is
Therefore
, we should exploite
them, only when very useful situations.use or manipulate to one's advantage
exploit
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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- moreover
- also
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- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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