With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extent do you agree?

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People who have something in common regularly attract each other,
that
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that's
how we make friends. It is true that with online communication people can find
someone
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who have a same taste
on
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for
something easier and we can easily talk to each other about it.
However
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, most of online friends can not be
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trusted
. Real
world
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friends
usually be
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usually are
the one that we met at school, university or work, that means we spend most of our life with them. We can go out with each other to do something basically
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as having a lunch or watching a movie
to
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for
something extremely like hiking or surfing if we like. Just one call and we can make
a
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an
appointment for a trip with our friends in
real
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the real world
world
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without taking a risk. Even though, some of our online friends do not befriend with us because they
are feel
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are feeling
feel
lonely or want some
someone
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to talk to. Some of them are trying to take advantage of these innocent online people. We can find
someone
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who are being nice, polite, kind, handsome or
beuatiful
delighting the senses or exciting intellectual or emotional admiration
beautiful
in
online
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online world, but
the online world but
the online world the online world but
world
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but that may not what they really are. In
online
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the online world
an online world
world
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, people can easily hide their true self and spread a lie to each other. It is hard to find
someone
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who
are being
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is being
honest
to
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with
you. In my opinion, with online communication we can make new friends
easier but
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easier, but
we still need friends in
real
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the real world
world
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, online friends are not
permanant
continuing or enduring without marked change in status or condition or place
permanent
. We still need
someone
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to hang out with,
someone
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who can be by our side all the time we need.
This
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is what online friends can not be capable of and
that is
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why I do not agree with
this
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statement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • connectivity
  • geographical gaps
  • interact
  • social media platforms
  • messaging apps
  • revolutionized
  • physical distance
  • online communities
  • camaraderie
  • immediate surroundings
  • unparalleled opportunities
  • superficial relationships
  • excessive reliance
  • emotional warmth
  • tactile comfort
  • digital communication
  • digital divide
  • internet censorship
  • global connectivity
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