A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is no doubt, that only person can make a decision regarding what kind of lifestyle follows,
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, the
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should provide all different kinds of facilities to promote healthy routine. In my opinion, a decision to be healthy has to be made by a person, while the authority should support the good health of
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residents
the resident
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with, it is a personal choice to drink alcohol or to smoke, as well as, eat healthy food and do regular exercise. Take,
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, cities where the park has free access, it does not matter for a person who did not choose to be fit. It means, that's a personal decision cannot be changed by the
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. But it can stimulate a willing to be healthy.
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, even the
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cannot take responsibilities for the right choice of the citizen, they can motivate by providing needed facilities, like parks, a sports complex, gyms.
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, if there is no place in the city to do exercise or buy healthy food it is impossible for people to keep following a healthy path.
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, the UAE
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is giving money and valuable prizes for
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an
inhabitant who lost weight, as there is high-level obesity among local people.
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a great example of people manipulation of a better life. Taking everything into consideration, I believe, that the main responsibilities of personal health belong to individuals but can be manipulated by the
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.
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, the
government
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should stimulate a desire of keeping citizen healthy and help inhabitant to follow the right lifestyle.
Submitted by Ibrahim Abouelazm on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personal accountability
  • health outcomes
  • public health campaigns
  • regulations
  • healthcare services
  • environmental quality
  • socio-economic factors
  • governmental intervention
  • healthy living
  • informed health decisions
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