Many countries thought that children have to do homework in their free time while other say children should do more outdoor activity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that some governments consider the doing homework by teens in their free
time
is necessary. This
essay disagrees with the statement because the additional load of the curriculum harms the development of the young person's body from both a physiological and psychological point of view, and also
prevents students from having extra time
to themselves for a variety of creative endeavours.
Thanks to the studies conducted by Stanford University, it was found that spending more than 2 hours on learning after school
has a harmful influence on the student's health. Sedentary lifestyles can be dangerous and can cause health problems such
as obesity. Having to work a lot at home means that a student has fewer opportunities to socialize, which can lead to poor communication skills in the future, and children become reserved. For example
, my classmate had a sharp drop in school
performance after intensive classes at home.
School
is already a full-time
job for students, as they generally spend over 6 hours each day in class. But students need to explore the world and also
have extracurricular activities such
as sports, music, or art that are just as important as their traditional courses. Homework prevents self-discovery and having the time
to learn new skills outside of the school
system. For instance
, one of my acquaintances always got high marks at school
, but he did not have real friends, therefore now
he is a closed and an unsociable young man.
In conclusion, Accept comma addition
therefore, now
this
essay disagrees that allocation of time
for homework after the heavy school
day is more preferred than personal development and outdoor activity because students are already tired, and tremendous homework tasks will only wearier each day and cause complete burnout, after that, personal self-improvement will be impossible.Submitted by Nikita on
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