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Nowadays more and more people consume fast food on a regular basis. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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Today, many of the people are consuming the fast
food
 for their basic meals. As per
this
 argument, there are several advantages and disadvantages can be identified.
Therefore
,
this
 essay will elaborate my viewpoints in detail and
Then
 I'll reach to a proper conclusion.
Firstly
, It can be said that, many people are now eating the so much fast
food
 due to the numerous reasons. Having a busy lifestyle is a major problem for the many of the people while they do not have enough time to prepare their home meal so they usually tend to have their meals in the popular fast
food
 restaurants
such
 as McDonalds, KFC, Hungry Jacks, Domino's...Etc. Other than
this
 busy lifestyle, those people prefer to eat in
such
 fast foods on a regular basis, so it has a negative impact on the health.
In other words
, so much junk
food
 means that, so much cholesterol and protein,
on the other hand
,
this
 will lead to gain the weight of a person.
Secondly
, There are many symptoms like heart disease, cancer and blood pressure can be identified, when people are adding too much junk
food
 into their meals, Perhaps, the regular consumption of
such
food
 can be really threatening to the human being because of the some ingredients are not so good for the health.
Moreover
, when talking about the advantages of
such
food
 consumption can be various. Even though, people do not require to cook at home so it will save their time as well as it might be cheaper to buy in the restaurant.
Besides
, people can enjoy their leisure time freely and happily and yet they can have their favourite meals by just ordering themselves.
Finally
, to conclude
this
, it can be said that, there are so many advantages and disadvantages can be identified on
this
 trend.
However
, it can be said that, disadvantages of
this
 trend outweigh its advantages, anyhow that, the regular consumption of the fast
food
 might be not so good for the health in the long run.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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