Write a letter to the director of your company to recommend a group in your local community which deserves help. In your letter, you should tell: why you suggest helping this group how your company can help this group what the benefits your company will in return for.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to suggest an opinion regarding helping a local community by offering jobs from your company
.
I am living in Warrington, a group of people from Syria has came
there and created a community. As they are new and Wrong verb form
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has
language barriers they are struggling to live in the UK. I am well aware that our Correct subject-verb agreement
have
company
is well known in terms of helping community
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the community
hence
, helping them would be a great one.
As our firm is opening a new outlet in Manchester it would be much appreciated if you could give them jobs, which will be a great stress relief for them in terms of economic
crisis.
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the economic
As a result
of helping in their difficult situation can build a
affection towards our Change the article
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company
which will increase our company
's output. In addition
to that they can promote our company
through mouth publicity which will be a
added benefit for us.
I expect a positive response from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Tom WilsonChange the article
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task response
The letter touches upon the idea of helping a local community group, but it lacks specific details about the group and how the company can help beyond offering jobs.
coherence and cohesion
The overall logical structure of the letter is adequate, but there is room for improvement in linking the ideas cohesively.
