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Recently, it is common for people not to know their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem?

#people #neighbors
It is a common phenomenon of not being aware about the people who lives
next
 to your door.In the era of advancement and modernization the habit of peeing into other's houses has decreased to a certain extent.People are now least interested about their neighbours and is a very big issue in the global scenario.My essay will highlight certain points about the problems people face of not knowing their neighbours. The person who lives
next
 to you can be an asset for you in the most difficult times.You can seek help from them in hard times.As a cause of humanity neighbours are willing to help one another.For
this
 it is important to know them.But the generation today is so busy that they don't have time to know the person who lives
next
 to them.They don't like to keep an eye on them and demand personal space for them and their family.Getting to know them and offering help today is not acceptable as people are not willing to welcome anyone
.
Accept space
.
 Your neighbour can be a threat to you if you don't take all the required information. They may be sparse.Taking the required information is necessary.Hoping to know they would help to have safety
first
 one of your house if you are going to a vacation.They can help you financially if you need one at a time.They can create a social circle and
thus
 interaction becomes easy. We can solve
this
 problem by inviting them to our home get together wherein you can get an opportunity to know them.You can make your child's friends with their child.
This
 will strengthen their bond and
thus
 you can know each other more.Other than
this
 you can all plan a family picnic together on weekends.
This
 will not only increase your bond, but
also
 help you to get the required information you were looking for their family.
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