Recently, it is common for people not to know their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem?

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It is a common phenomenon of not being aware about the people who lives

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to your door.In the era of advancement and modernization the habit of peeing into other's houses has decreased to a certain extent.People are now least interested about their neighbours and is a very big issue in the global scenario.My essay will highlight certain points about the problems people face of not knowing their neighbours. The person who lives

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to you can be an asset for you in the most difficult times.You can seek help from them in hard times.As a cause of humanity neighbours are willing to help one another.For

this

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it is important to know them.But the generation today is so busy that they don't have time to know the person who lives

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to them.They don't like to keep an eye on them and demand personal space for them and their family.Getting to know them and offering help today is not acceptable as people are not willing to welcome anyone

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Your neighbour can be a threat to you if you don't take all the required information. They may be sparse.Taking the required information is necessary.Hoping to know they would help to have safety

first

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one of your house if you are going to a vacation.They can help you financially if you need one at a time.They can create a social circle and

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interaction becomes easy. We can solve

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problem by inviting them to our home get together wherein you can get an opportunity to know them.You can make your child's friends with their child.

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will strengthen their bond and

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you can know each other more.Other than

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you can all plan a family picnic together on weekends.

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will not only increase your bond, but

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help you to get the required information you were looking for their family.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

310 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

community engagement
social isolation
neighborhood watch
local initiatives
virtual interaction
privacy concerns
resident mobility
technological advancements
social media influence
work-life balance
busy personal schedules
community events
local residents
social interaction
community ties

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Recently, it is common for people not to know their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem?

Fully explain your ideas

some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. what might be reason for this? what are the advantages and disvantages?

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