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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

#people #children #home #child’s #development #school
I think
this
 topic is
quiet debateable topic
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a quiet debatable topic
quiet debatable topic
the quiet debatable topic
 among new generation parents. As these days parents are very sensitive regarding the upbringing of their children. Generally speaking both the situations have their own pros and cons
on
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of
 the
child
 development. So,
firstly
 I would like to point out the growth curve of the
child
 staying at home. The
child
getting
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gets
 their education from home make them more intellectual and focused towards its work as the complete attention of the teacher is
on
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for
 one
child
only wheras
Accept comma addition
only, whereas
only whereas
only where
only wires
 as in the
school
 teacher have to deal the big group of like 30-35 students in a class. So, it is
quiet
to a degree (not used with a negative)
quite
 impossible to concentrate on one
child
everytime
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every time
. In
this
 scenario of
school
child
 may feel left out and
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
 its interest in that particular subject or complete studies. I would like to add the growth of the
child
’s interest will reach to peak easily as
compare
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compared
 to
school
. The other fact is that
also
child
easy
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easily
 learn to adjust and share in big groups of
school
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schools
the school
. As the one became more discipline in the
school
 environment as they have fixed
time table
a schedule listing events and the times at which they will take place
timetable
. Apart from all these the
child
 became more versatile and get various choices to get attracted towards them. The
child
 became more extrovert and well groomed. To sum up
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 have to admit that
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 can’t find a
really
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real
 good solution for
this
 problem. All
aspect
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aspects
 have advantage and disadvantage. Certainly we have to think much more about
this
 topic in the future.
Submitted by Geetika Gambhir on

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