Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Climate
change
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, loss of
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, rare and dying animals are chiefly problems of our time in the World. Some believe that in our time is the loss of variety
plant
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and animals the main environmental problem while others
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that there are most crucial environmental problems.
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of all,
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age has some different problems and people are thinking losing animals and
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it the very important topic of our World.
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, Panda and White bear are decreasing in natural life because of the climate
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and unfreezing or hunting is the biggest problem of types of bird. In my sincere view,
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is that correct.
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, from
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opinion
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government should restrict to hunting and found variety solutions.
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, others
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is that environmental problem have been influenced by another subject, so their opinions are several subjects more substantial compared to loss of animals and
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.
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, using plastic and some cosmetic product get hurt to climate
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and bad effect of environmental.
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, plastic is unhealthy for people and
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to the World because plastic may reasons for cancer.
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,
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cosmetic product, including co2 gases. Researching say that, the ozone layer has been getting thinner by that gases. As far as I am concerned, ı agree
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idea because when ozone layer get thinner, climate
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has been influenced by it and
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this
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result may affect to the environment. In my
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, we can say it is like a loop. To conclude, we discussed both of ideas, so according to me environmental problems have several reasons, so ı agree with both of ideas. People should be careful if they living nature and parents should give information about environmental problems to their kids.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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