Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefits of having a uniform for the staff?

The industries having same dress code for the individuals working there are to be worn all the time.In my opinion
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I completely agree with the statement.
However keeping
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However, keeping
in mind the societal issues, it's a good measure taken by certain companies. Uniforms create a sense of equality amongst the staff working in the office.The social business which some people create are all vanished.But
however
all people do not prefer wearing uniforms in the workplace. People who wear uniforms are all equal, whether how rich, they are how well off families they come from.
For instance
, one of my colleagues once came to the office wearing the same shirt for the
third
straight
third
day.The other staff started making fun of him, which
further
led to mental disturbance. People are judged by the types of clothes they wear.If the individual wears clothes of a good brand he/she is rich but
on the other hand
, if the same person wears a cloth of a low brand he is judged immediately.I don't know why our society judges people by the type of clothes they wear. To get rid of
this
discrimination many companies introduced uniforms, which had a positive impact on the psychological impact of our society.These uniforms helped employees to be on the same platform where other individuals are. To conclude, I would like to say that uniforms should be made mandatory for companies where social clothes become a social stigma and
this
can help individuals to get rid of
such
stigmas.
This
would help people to maintain enthusiasm to work at work.
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