Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the government and environmental developers have been working hard to solve some pollution problems from air transportation.

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that it should be restricted

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I believe that its advantages outweigh

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. There are a number of benefits that

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air transit has dedicated to humans all around the world.

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modern

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, they allow millions of passengers to travel to other countries, which is

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conductive

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to develop

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industry. In fact,

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International tourism has become the backbone of many economies, not only developing countries but

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developed countries.

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transportation is able to impart a

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number of cargoes

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an advantage for manufacturing and agricultural industries.

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, Vietnam annually exports thousands of tons of rice and fruit, which contributes towards

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taxation and is used to solve some social problems,

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as employment or hunger. It is true that the authorities should not ban or restrict

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, even if the cost of the development of the economies. Since other private vehicles are

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causing pollution and using

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of fuel,

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they should encourage their citizens to participate in public shipment.

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, Singapore is

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cleanest country because the pedagogy institutions have taught the

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environment ways for the citizens when they were

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children.

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,

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investing the

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and effort to research the

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electrical systems, which lead to save

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energy and protect

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environment. Airbus and Boeing, the two main manufacturers of

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, are working to build electric

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engines that do not consume fossil fuels and these engines will eliminate the pollution from

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. In conclusion, in spite of the

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a large amount of fossil fuel

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planes

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I still believe that

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restricting the

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would be an unpractical decision.