According to most doctors, adults need thirty minutes of physical activity at least five days a week to be healthy. However, most adults do not get this recommended amount of exercise. What can be done to help people get the exercise they need? Give examples to support your answer.

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It is recommended by many physicians to do exercise thirty minutes on a daily basis minimum five days a week to be in a good health. Unfortunately,

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is not understood by majority of

adult population

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the adult population

.I think, there are some steps that can be taken in order to get it implemented.

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of all,

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the power

of social media can be used as an effective measure. The world has become a global village, with

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the advent

of internet and smart phones. Information can be easily accessed by an individual through smart phones with a single click. If videos of short durations are made by the health sector demonstrating the advantages of doing exercise, it would be more effective because visual information has been proven beneficial in conveying messages.

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, people are watching more serials and films

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the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

. These movies have a great influence on practical life which has been proven in published literature.

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, counselling sessions should be arranged by local health sector on a regular basis.These seminars or sessions can be conducted physically as well as remotely on

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the internet

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software like Zoom, Microsoft Teams

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available and people are using these comfortably for their meetings and sessions. In

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way, information about doing exercise and its benefits can be delivered to those areas as well where it is difficult to reach because of time constraints.

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, feedback sessions can be conducted in the same way to

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the effects of these steps. In conclusion, I believe that these are the practical solutions which should be funded by the government.

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campaign can be led by country's celebrities as

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would help people understand the importance of doing physical activity as recommended.

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According to most doctors, adults need thirty minutes of physical activity at least five days a week to be healthy. However, most adults do not get this recommended amount of exercise. What can be done to help people get the exercise they need? Give examples to support your answer.

Your opinion

Some people think that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider; the rich are becoming richer. and the poor are even getting poorer. What problems can the situation cause? What can be done to reduce this gap?

A new sports centre has opened in your area. You want to visit the new sports centre and get some information. Write an letter to your friend to invite him/her.

Art classes such as painting or drawing are important for children’s development, so it should be compulsory in high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

That the government should be responsible for the education of it's citizen while others feel that they shud pay for their own education. Discuss both views and give ur opinion