Some people think that arts (for example music or painting) don’t directly improve people’s wellbeing and therefore the government should spend money on other things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly thought that governmental funds should be directed to other spheres rather than the

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field, as the latter does not ameliorate people’s welfare. In my opinion, I believe that

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reaped from any kind of

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exposures are indispensable both for society and artists, and

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domain is likely to be subsidized. One key reason irrevocably tied to

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of funds for

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the arts

is

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a cultural legacy

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gained for the public.

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, not only do people become well-rounded while attending

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exhibitions and concerts, but they

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preserve their cultural heritage for

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generations in the long run. Were it not for funding

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sphere, people may become indifferent to their culture, which may result in the loss of national inheritance. A prime example is Italy, where due to a regular fundraising the

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sphere, Italian society becomes incomparable in preserving their masterpieces and raising culturally orientated generations. Yet another reason to finance arts is a golden opportunity for artists to be motivated in creating masterpieces. As the more they are supported by local authorities, the higher is their urge to expand their artistic skills. In stark contrast, knowing that irrespective of their efforts, they still will not be appreciated by the government, young artists are likely to sacrifice their interests and find themselves in other occupations.

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, having carried out a research

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revealed that in Armenia the vast majority of

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alumni change their professions after several years of self-employment, because of the lack of governmental support, which in turn causes the loss of new talents. In conclusion, I am convinced that financing arts must be the top priority

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the governmental budget, as it is part and parcel in generating caring society in terms of preserving arts and culture.

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will encourage artists to apply their abilities to the fullest,

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nurturing new talents.