Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Nowadays,
world
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the world
is changing a lot as compare to the past. Due to
this
reason
mostely
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most
mostly
people prefer to migrate in
foreign country
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a foreign country
for the better opportunities and they must have to speak another
language
at
there
objective case of they
them
their
. I think sometimes speaking a different
language
causes major problems, because of the misunderstanding. In the following paragraphs, I have some strong arguments to support my view. When we
are living
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were living
in different nation at that time we have to learn their
language
to adjust in routine life. But many times, due to the
lake
the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable
lack
knowledge of
foregine
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a foreign language
foreign language
language
, we are facing
serious strugle
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a serious struggle
serious struggle
.
For example
, If we are living in
france
a republic in western Europe; the largest country wholly in Europe
France
, at that time if we don't know proper french and we speak with local
people
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people, then
then
they will be
frustrate
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frustrated
and they
possibaly
by chance
possibly
possible
they will ignore us.
Manytimes
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Many times
we see that people are fighting
onl
and nothing more
only
on
because of the minor communication problem. In 2009, one government report shows that, people who are living in a different country, among them 50
percentage
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percentages
are facing social problems only because of the foreign
language
.
On the other hand
, to ignore
this
issue
language
course is suggested by the universities or colleges to the international students.
Government
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The government
also have
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also has
to focus on "how to solve
this
matter" and
also
provide the free
foregine
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
language
classes. So people can easily learn it. To conclude, I personally believe that,
mostely
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most
mostly
problrams
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
are created by the people when they speak
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
language
rather than their own local
language
.
This
is not beneficial foe the society as
weel
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
well
as for the country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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