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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to inquire about your recent advertisement posted by your college about various computer courses offered and preliminary requirements. I am very much interested to enroll
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 the computer course
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 since
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 will be an added advantage to my career development. After carefully reading the requirements, I have not completed your basic criteria of elementary course due to myriad financial
crisis
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 in my family which devastated my educational goal and I could pursue for future studies. Having said that my learning intention
is not vanished
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 from me anymore. So I want to
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 extend my wisdom in the computer field. I would place my humble request to shed some light
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 my academic path and provide me with
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sponsorship or feasible discount in
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 fee as a stepping stone to
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 me for my
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 studies. I look forward
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 from you with
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. Yours faithfully, Mack Jonson
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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