Some people say the most important thing about being rich is that it gives you the opportunity to give back or help the poor. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
It is indubitable that salary is very important for helping others.
However
Linking Words
, I disagree with the It is indubitable that wage is very important for helping others.
However
Linking Words
, I disagree with the given statement that it is the most essential thing in terms of a chance to help the needy. I believe that there are numerous ways of helping the underprivileged, and monetary aid is certainly not the best forms of aid. My
first
Linking Words
argument to support my viewpoint is that giving wealth to the poor would be a very shortsighted approach. It would satiate their needs for some time, but ultimately they have to be made capable of standing on their own. Providing education and job training is a better way of helping them.
For example
Linking Words
, my friend’s mother, teaches the children of the slum area every evening. She is herself not very rich, but she is helping in better ways than pay can do.
Secondly
Linking Words
, it is not always the financial help, which is needed by people. A timely helping hand when a person is suffering is better than helping to fund.
For instance
Linking Words
, in natural calamities,
such
Linking Words
as earthquakes and floods, the immediate need of people is food and medical care. Many college students volunteered to carry food and medicines to the needy, when there was a flood in some areas of Punjab, a few years ago. Fresh medical graduates
also
Linking Words
went and stayed there and helped people with immediate medical care. In times of crises,
such
Linking Words
help outstrips any help that wealth can provide. Opponents would argue that only the rich are in a position to help the poor, as people need check for even the basic necessities of life
such
Linking Words
as food, clothing and shelter. Even providing education and job training to the destitute, needs capital. They have a point, but I still believe that the help in terms of personal effort provided by those who are, themselves, not so affluent is equally good. To sum up, if one is rich, he is in a better situation to help others who need pay and all the things which property can provide.
However
Linking Words
, I reiterate my view by saying that to help others, one need not be rich as help can be provided in many better ways than with payment.
Submitted by Lan Anh on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: