Doctors, nurses, and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be paid more than entertainment and sports celebrities. To what extent do you agree?

There is enormously hard work, dedication, and significant determination are involved in acquiring any professional degree like a doctor, nurses, and teacher. It is

also

an agreeable fact that to be a sport and entertainment required nearly the same commitment.

Therefore

, I believe the extent of responsibility involved in the treatment of any living being and teaching is

tremendously

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tremendous

and huge. The impact of

health

care

and teaching professionals has a significant effect on individuals, their families, and society.

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Hence, these

responsibilities shall be considered and will pay more than anyone.

Health

care

professionals can save people's lives, not only in their clinic or hospital, but

also

at a battlefield and with minimal pieces of equipment and workforce. All

health

care

professionals have to work in a shift, and they do not

care

about time, safety, and

health

. They have to do a long hour shift, which can be over 24 hours, and all are deemed responsible for ensuring patient

care

. During their works, sometimes they cannot eat or drink or take

care

of themselves and their families; they always think about their patient's well-being before anything else.

Furthermore

, working with other people's lives makes them very pressured and stressed; they will be shocked if their patients died. Instances like a corona pandemic these days only the

health

care

workers are in the front army, working day and night to save as many lives as possible around the globe and not considering that they are by themselves with their immediate families are in a constant threat of catching

this

deadly virus.

Therefore

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

honestly believe they must get not only a massive round of applaud but with Monterrey incentives.

Similarly

, the teacher educates children who shape a future generation, thereby constructing an educated society.

This

responsibility is very crucial and demanding, like a make or break situation. Teachers are not only responsible for delivering bookish knowledge to their students, but

also

equipped them with real-life practical experiences like how to talk in public; how to deal with difficult situations; how to behave with elders and younger people and list is very long. To illustrate with an example, my sister was stuttering and diagnosed with dyslexia in grade 4. One of her teachers started working to overcome her difficulties by giving her confidence and much needed skills.

As a result

, after twenty years, she is doing supremely well in her professional life. In conclusion,

although

the work of the sports personnels and entertainment industry of life is essential and respectable for a society, doctors

,

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,

nurses, and teachers have the edge over others, so they must be paid more. .