Doctors, nurses, and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be paid more than entertainment and sports celebrities. To what extent do you agree?

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, dedication, and significant determination involved in acquiring any professional degree like a doctor, nurses, and teacher. It is

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an agreeable fact that to be a sport and entertainment required nearly the same commitment.

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, I believe the extent of responsibility involved in the treatment of any living being and teaching is

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and teaching professionals has a significant effect on individuals, their families, and society.

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responsibilities shall be considered and will pay more than anyone.

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professionals can save people's lives, not only in their clinic or hospital, but

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at a battlefield and with minimal pieces of equipment and workforce. All

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professionals have to

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in a shift, and they do not

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about time, safety, and

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. They have to do a long hour shift, which can be over 24 hours, and all are deemed responsible for ensuring patient

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, sometimes they cannot eat or drink or take

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of themselves and their families; they always think about their patient's well-being before anything else.

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, working with other people's lives makes them very pressured and stressed; they will be shocked if their patients died. Instances like a corona pandemic these days only the

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workers are in the front army, working day and night to save as many lives as possible around the globe and not considering that they are by themselves with their immediate families are in a constant threat of catching

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deadly virus.

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, I honestly believe they must get not only a massive round of applause but with Monterrey incentives.

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, the teacher educates children who shape a future generation, thereby constructing an educated society.

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responsibility is very crucial and demanding, like a make or break situation. Teachers are not only responsible for delivering bookish knowledge to their students, but

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equipped them with real-life practical experiences like how to talk in public; how to deal with difficult situations; how to behave with elders and younger people and the list is very long. To illustrate with an example, my sister was stuttering and diagnosed with dyslexia in grade 4. One of her teachers started working to overcome her difficulties by giving her confidence and much needed skills.

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, after twenty years, she is doing supremely well in her professional life. In conclusion,

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of the sports personnels and entertainment industry of life is essential and respectable for a society, doctors

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nurses, and teachers have the edge over others, so they must be paid more.