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Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organization to continue their development. On the other hand, others think that practical aid or advice is more useful. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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Some people argue that, it is necessary to provide the financial
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 for the developing countries to carry out their development, while others argue that, it's an important to give them with the practical
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 or the advice which can be more useful.
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 essay will explain my viewpoints in detail and
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 I'll reach to a proper conclusion. On the one hand, it can be said that, there are some countries are struggling with the financial difficulties and
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 has been resulted to the delay in their development.
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, The countries like Bangladesh, Nepal, India, Pakistan are required some kind of financial
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 or relief in order to develop their rural areas, so, they are now having the so many agreements with the UNICEF and the NGO for getting the loans and the other
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. Thereby,
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 will help to improve the
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 countries infrastructure, education and the health care sector.
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, some people believe that, giving them with the practical advice is far more beneficial to the
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 countries.
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,
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 is helping them to get the new knowledge so
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 countries can apply those methods, systems and procedures to their existing methods, so
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 will be added benefit to the
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 developing countries.
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, introducing the new software for the IT firm can be helping to boost their profit.
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, to conclude
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, it can be said that, providing them with the financial
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 and the practical aid of advice is important to improve the growth in the developing countries.
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, the both factors are equally important to consider as per
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 case.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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