Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter: a. Invite him/her to a public event on your country b. Describe the public event C. Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he /she will visit

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Hi John, How have you been since we

last

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met? I hope to see you again soon. I am writing

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letter to invite you to visit my country, Egypt in the

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month. I have heard that you have a vacation in August, so it will be a great chance to visit Cairo in the period, because

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we will have a big art event from 19th to 25th. As I know you are a big fan of

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photography and painting. So, I think

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artistic celebration will be suitable for you because the most of world artists will be there and participants with their photos and artworks.

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, we can visit some ancient places in Cairo

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as the pyramids and museums.

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, we will spend some days in Alexandria. At the end of your

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we will go to Luxor and Aswan that beautiful old cities which you had asked me before about it. I hope you accept my invitation. See you soon! Best Wishes, Reda

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

171 words

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Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter: a. Invite him/her to a public event on your country b. Describe the public event C. Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he /she will visit

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effectiv

In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

Not enough student around the world choose to study science subjects at the university. What are the reasons for this? What impact does this issue have on society? Give your reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

People eat more processed food now than in the past. What are the reasons for this? What might be the results?