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Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter: a. Invite him/her to a public event on your country b. Describe the public event C. Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he /she will visit

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Hi John, How have you been since we
last
 met? I hope to see you again soon. I am writing
this
 letter to invite you to visit my country, Egypt in the
next
 month. I have heard that you have a vacation in August, so it will be a great chance to visit Cairo in the period, because
in
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we will have a big art event from 19th to 25th. As I know you are a big fan of
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photography and painting. So, I think
this
 artistic celebration will be suitable for you because the most of world artists will be there and participants with their photos and artworks.
Also
, we can visit some ancient places in Cairo
such
 as the pyramids and museums.
In addition
, we will spend some days in Alexandria. At the end of your
journey
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 we will go to Luxor and Aswan that beautiful old cities which you had asked me before about it. I hope you accept my invitation. See you soon! Best Wishes, Reda
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