Write a letter to your neighbour requesting him to lend you his laptop. In you letter: - Describe why you need a laptop. - How long you will be requiring the laptop. - Ensure him about the safety of his device and its content.

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Dear

Mr.

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Patel, How are you? My name is Ishan Saverdekar, living

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four blocks away from your house. I am writing

this

letter to ask you a great favour for lending me your laptop computer to use

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for

couple

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of hours. As you are aware of the current lockdown situation in our area due to

pandemic

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the pandemic

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issue of COVID 19, I am not able to reach

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the office for completing the website uploading task which is at the highest priority project assigned to me at work.

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, my personal computer's charger is missing at the moment. The task is so important for me that if I could not complete

this

task today,

then

the company may lose

his

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one of the big clients and

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maybe

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may be

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me, my job. The

wesite

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website

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uploading work will take only 4 to 5 hours maximum. Once it is finished, I will return your computer to you in the same condition as it was before.

In addition

, for the protection of your device and stored material in it, I will make sure that no one else will touch your machine. I hope you will understand my circumstances and will help me with

this

great support. I am waiting for your quick positive reply. Yours sincerely,

Submitted by Ishaan433 on Sun Jun 21 2020

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

213 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your neighbour requesting him to lend you his laptop. In you letter: - Describe why you need a laptop. - How long you will be requiring the laptop. - Ensure him about the safety of his device and its content.

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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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