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Artificial Intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. Do you agree with this statement?

#intelligence #teachers #classroom
Nowadays,
technology
 is overtaking the human intelligence. In fact,
technology
 is driving crazy in our lives, it's seems that one day our education instructors would be replaced
with
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by
 the
technology
. I would strongly go with
this
 statement.
For example
, artificial intelligence is an upcoming
technology
 which will lead the future of the world. There have been many technologies in the past, but,
this
 gonna make
an
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a
 huge impact in
business world
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the business world
 as well. Many IT people
are preferring
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prefer
 to choose
this
 course as a part of their
studies
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study
.
Furthermore
, it will be added as the most important course in our bachelor education. Many rich countries like
United States
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the United States
, UK and other European countries have already started implementing
this
technology
 and they seen many positive results.
Nevertheless
, it is not only for software field, but, it could
also
 be used in
business
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the business
filed
catch or pick up (balls) in baseball or cricket
field
 as well. All big companies which run
with
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by
third
 parties and it helps the companies who are dependent on the back end team. The user interface, which is provided to any
business
 could
be now developed
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be developed now
now be developed
 by using artificial intelligence. Because of
this
 booming
technology
, many companies paying high salaries for people who are qualified in
this
technology
. On the whole,
this
 kind of innovative technologies could improve the standard of the education,
business
 and it will be beneficial in our daily routine life as well.
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