There is a problem related with the changing room of your gym in your community. You reported it several times, but it was not solved. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, you should: • describe the problem • what they said while reporting the problem • what you want the manager to do.

Dear Mr Stephen, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I am regularly using the gym and the experience of the changing

room

is completely disappointing because of a few problems. The main problem is related to

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hygiene and cleanliness. Changing rooms are dirty as people do not keep their used clothes in the designated area. Due to

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reason,

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area is full of bad smells and it's unbearable to stand in the changing

room

.

Additionally

, the conditions of the lockers are not so good, most of them are broken and the ones which are working are

also

not in good condition. I have reported

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these problems in the complaint section,

last

week. The person who lodges the complaint

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told me that it is the fault of people who are not using the changing area as they do not follow the guidelines.

Moreover

, regarding the lockers, he told me

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can be fixed only by

next

month as there are other issues which are on priority. I would like to give you suggestions to improve the condition.

Firstly

, strict rules should be implemented for the changing

room

and heavy

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or punishment should be implied on the people who will break the rule. Regarding cleaning, multiple

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cleaning should be done to the changing

room

in order to maintain hygiene and cleanliness. Yours faithfully, Davis