There is a problem related with the changing room of your gym in your community. You reported it several times, but it was not solved. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, you should: • describe the problem • what they said while reporting the problem • what you want the manager to do.

Dear Mr Stephen, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am regularly using the gym and the experience of the changing
room
is completely disappointing because of a few problems. The main problem is related to
the
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hygiene and cleanliness. Changing rooms are dirty as people do not keep their used clothes in the designated area. Due to
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reason,
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area is full of bad smells and it's unbearable to stand in the changing
room
.
Additionally
, the conditions of the lockers are not so good, most of them are broken and the ones which are working are
also
not in good condition. I have reported
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these problems in the complaint section,
last
week. The person who lodges the complaint
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told me that it is the fault of people who are not using the changing area as they do not follow the guidelines.
Moreover
, regarding the lockers, he told me
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can be fixed only by
next
month as there are other issues which are on priority. I would like to give you suggestions to improve the condition.
Firstly
, strict rules should be implemented for the changing
room
and heavy
penalty
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or punishment should be implied on the people who will break the rule. Regarding cleaning, multiple
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cleaning should be done to the changing
room
in order to maintain hygiene and cleanliness. Yours faithfully, Davis
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