There is a problem related with the changing room of your gym in your community. You reported it several times, but it was not solved. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, you should: • describe the problem • what they said while reporting the problem • what you want the manager to do.
Dear Mr Stephen,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am regularly using the gym and the experience of the changing room
is completely disappointing because of a few problems.
The main problem is related to the
hygiene and cleanliness. Changing rooms are dirty as people do not keep their used clothes in the designated area. Due to Correct article usage
apply
the
reason, Correct determiner usage
this
complete
area is full of bad smells and it's unbearable to stand in the changing Add an article
the complete
room
. Additionally
, the conditions of the lockers are not so good, most of them are broken and the ones which are working are also
not in good condition.
I have reported about
these problems in the complaint section, Change preposition
apply
last
week. The person who lodges the complaint,
told me that it is the fault of people who are not using the changing area as they do not follow the guidelines. Remove the comma
apply
Moreover
, regarding the lockers, he told me it
can be fixed only by Correct pronoun usage
they
next
month as there are other issues which are on priority.
I would like to give you suggestions to improve the condition. Firstly
, strict rules should be implemented for the changing room
and heavy penalty
or punishment should be implied on the people who will break the rule. Regarding cleaning, multiple Fix the agreement mistake
penalties
time
cleaning should be done to the changing Fix the agreement mistake
times
room
in order to maintain hygiene and cleanliness.
Yours faithfully,
DavisSubmitted by Jskwl on
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