Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people's health, more and more people are eating it. Why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?

All over the world fast
food
is becoming more and more popular which individuals can not ignore the consumption of consuming it. Doctors are informed that eating a fast made
food
can damage our health abilities.
This
essay will describe the pros and cons of fast
food
which leads more people eating it and why youngsters and individuals can not stop consuming.
Firstly
, I agree that fast meal is delicious which can attract people to buy it. Nowadays people are too busy to
cook
a
food
after a long day's work for that reason more people are lead to buy ready made
food
. To exemplify, my neighbourhood parents are employees of a vital company. After finishing their duty, they feel exhausted to
cook
, for that reason they order a ready made
food
.
On the other hand
, fast
food
has lots of disadvantages, as the name suggests it is fast making meat which we don't know in how many hours they have cooked or baked.
Consequently
, it has lots of fats, which clearly tells us that they add an extra amount of sugar and oil.
For instance
, it's unhealthy for our children's health, do not contain any calories,
For example
, Arab nations are lazy to
cook
reason it's much easier them to purchase an easy made
food
, but if we compare Asians with Arabs they are all overrated. To conclude, its developing century, of course, more people are tending to eat fast
food
, but
However we
Accept comma addition
However, we
shouldn't forget that it's harmful to our bodies. Meanwhile, if wives stop working and stay at home for their youngsters they can
cook
delicious homemade
food
for their own. Home made
food
is more efficient and contains effectively more calories.
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