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A magazine wants to inculde contributions from its reders for an article called ‘the book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter Describe what this book was about Explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
 letter in regard to the magazine in which you are going to mention the books which have a great impact on readers. I have read an autobiography by Mahinder Singh Dhoni;
this
 book is all about his life
story
 so far, in which he has described whole incidents that caused his life to go through critical situations and how he prepared himself to combat all those challenges. The most inspiring face is when he left his house to be a cricketer. Despite his family issues, he stands against them bravely and gets a government job to
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 his game's needs. Why it inspired me because those incidents reminded me of my past, so I learned some ways as he solved those issues. As I belong to a middle-class family, I believe that
this
story
 will inspire many more because he has explained the life
story
 of an ordinary village boy. In the end, I would say please read
this
 book. It is a life-changing
story
. Yours faithfully, Gur
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task achievement
Expand more on how the book influenced you personally beyond recalling past incidents; give specific examples of changes in your perspective or behavior.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a single clear idea; consider splitting complex paragraphs into simpler ones for better readability.
task achievement
Appropriate formal tone maintained throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Good structure with clear opening and closing, enhancing readability.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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