social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks discuss both views
It is considered by online
platform
most popular in all generations, meanwhile they most share
their private thought social media this
way will bring a several consequence to user
. Social media not only is a trendy Suggestion
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phenomenon but
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phenomenon, but
also
is an essential entertainment for all generations, it's become an inseparable in our daily life. However most
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However, most
such
as Instagram, Facebook to name but a few. Social media as a significant
to receive and input Suggestion
sign
information
.While social media are a harmful tool if we use
it incorrectly. This
essay will gather about the risks and benefits, thus
will from a logical conclusion.
As we all know, social media have a wind variety of entertainment videos, it attracts different generation to watch and grab their attention. Firstly
, for the teenage group, social media as a share
emotion and daily life Suggestion
shared
platform
. As the anonymous system, user
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users
always
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always shares
share
their deep emotion and stories on the social media websites, apart from that, they can "like" and "comment" on the photos that can increase interpersonal with their friends. Secondly
, for family groups, social media as they can know their childern
private life, because childern
spend most time on social media, they alwats negect or decline to communicate with their parents, meanwile parents do not understand their childern
value and what is their hobby so that most family will use
social media to understand their childern
, even they can increase the conversation topic with their childern
. Finally
, for the mature persons such
as businesses, they hope to establish their business, social media provides a platform
to. Them establish or create a business.
On the other hand
, social media don't only have benefits but also
have several risks for user
. To start with, Suggestion
users
the user
share
personal information
on social media, it may steal by
thieves, personal Suggestion
from
information
is our identify and determine who I am, it is most significant symbol
, if our privacy stolen, the thief may Suggestion
the most significant symbol
use
your information
to do any illegal activities such
as cheating. Furthermore
, as I mention that most people will share
the emotion and stories, most social media have an anonymous system that they can input some hateful comments to attract people, it will become a cyber bullying. In addiction, social media is one of the function "share
" function. For example
, if you post some information
on your platform
, another user
can share
or forward to other people and you don't know who forward your post or information
therefore
it will lead you information
lose and most people recognize your details.
To sum up, if we use
social media be smart and careful, it will be a lot of entertaining for us, However
, social media can not input too much sensitive information
, if not, it will be a harmful tools. such
as losing Suggestion
Such
information
and cyber bullying.Submitted by Wong Venus on
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