Creative artists should be given the freedom to express their own ideas in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.

In our modern world, artists and creative people should be able to free to explain their own opinions in a way of their
art
. They must not be restricted by government authorities because of their way of own expressions. In my point of view, it is critically important to support
this
idea for the sake of both people and governments.
Firstly
, At the beginning of the 20th century, people became much freer than before, and people explain themselves in different ways.
As a result
of
this
, different
art
movements
are born
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are born with, such
are born with such
such
as cubism, Bauhaus, pop
art
, surrealism
etcetera
. Today, these movements still get artists to be inspired for future
art
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artistic
expressions. And
also
, If we preserve our freeness, we can see these new movements bigger and bigger in the future.
Secondly
, countries have some law enforcement to make people live peacefully, and these laws should protect people's personal life.
However
, apart from that, artists should be able to tell in their way of
art
whatever they want. Governments should support people's education, should rule the rules deciding if people are criminal or not or protect people's private life.
However
, the restriction of speech is not one of the
government's
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government
job
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jobs
. In conclusion, I believe the power of freedom of speech, and that power makes people stronger as well as governments. Today we can see those big strong governments gives people big rights to freedom.
Besides
that, big governments
also
have various
art
movements
such
as pop
art
, and that governments give inspiration to other societies.
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